Wednesday, May 22, 2013

1 short paragraph about whales!

In literacy we were told that we need to write a 3 sentence paragraph about whales! But first we had to pair up with a partner. I chose Nikki. Then we had to pair up with another group which was Jordan and Taimana and they judged our writing and we judged theirs! . . . . . 

Our paragraph about whales:

Whales are the longest living creatures in the ocean. They have thick layer of fat blubber that helps them to keep warm in the Antarctic ocean. Whales have a streamlined body that helps them push down the water, along with their flippers that help them steer.  

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